April 14, 2011

Mystical

 
~*Mystical*~


Life is that ever lasting flower
The flower that is always in constant bloom
People are that dying powder
That cause the flower to slowly consume
People cause the flower to die
Just as fast as those bees fly
People don’t care about the flower
They just care about the nectar it brings
They care about the flowers sweet things
Only a few care to keep the flower in bloom
Only a few are worried when the flower is doomed
The flower is life that ever lasting thing
Life is something that is truly a blessing
Once you poor that powder on our flower
Life will descend and we will follow in a whirlpool of sorrow
Because life is that ever lasting flower
So treat our flower correct, and we may just see tomorrow
~Everett Smith


10 comments:

  1. Gorgeous tones and light Bhupesh!

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  2. and, unrooted, it'll last even less long.
    nice poem.
    ROG, ABC Wednesday team

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  3. Wow! This is terrific Bhupesh. :)
    Nice poem too.

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  4. Oh wow words can't describe this beauty!! Magnificent is only I can say!! Happy Friday!

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  5. superb poem.
    thanks for sharing...

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  6. beautiful...that goes both for the click and the words...

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  7. Ahh hibiscus, my favourite flower.
    Nicely captured.

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